The follawing bar charts shows the different modes transport used to travel to and from work in one Europian city in 1960 , 1980 and 2000
The bar chart illustrates using percentage of four different vehicles in cities of Europe in 1960-2000.
Overall
, in 2000 users
of car
and in 1960 users
of foot
was the highest one. Meanwhile, all transport mode in 1960 was similar.
In 1960 total travellers of bus was 18% that
is less Correct pronoun usage
which
Change preposition
than then
then
bike percentage that are 25%. The Correct your spelling
the
bus
Correct quantifier usage
number of bus
users
increased during the next 20 years and account
Wrong verb form
accounted
just
over 25%, even more than Change preposition
for just
Correct article usage
the bike's
bike's
total number. Change noun form
bike
Also
, in the next 2 decade
the per cent of Fix the agreement mistake
decades
Add an article
the bus
a bus
bus
in 2000 that Fix the agreement mistake
buses
caunt
approximately 17%, they were 3 times more Correct your spelling
count
then
Replace the word
than
the
bike Correct article usage
apply
use
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used
in
Change preposition
apply
this
year.
In 2000 travelling by car
was higher than other
2 groups of Correct article usage
the other
year
. They peaked at over 35% Add an article
the year
that
is moreCorrect pronoun usage
which
4
times than usage in Change preposition
than 4
foot
in 2000. Fix the agreement mistake
feet
However
, in 1960 foot
users
was on the contrary
more then
number of Replace the word
than
car
for 6 times. On the other hand
, usage
number of Correct article usage
the usage
this
2 transports in 1980 Correct determiner usage
these
do
not have Correct subject-verb agreement
does
such
big differencies
. The Correct your spelling
differences
difference
car
more for only 5% than foot
.Add an article
a foot
the foot
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words users, car, foot with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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