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Writing Samples
Band 6

You recently attended a training course for your work. Your employer has asked you for your feedback on the training course. Write a letter to your employe. In your letter: Remind your employer what the course was about Explain why the course was useful to you in your work Suggest why the course may not be suitable for some of your other colleagues

Dear Sir, I hope
this
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 finds u well. I am delighted to provide feedback on the training session titled "Managerial Principles", which was held on 25 December 2025 at a famous company, Malhotra and Sons Ltd. The course was really meaningful, which provided a detailed introduction to management and its roles.
Moreover
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, it allocates the various facts that can be
prioritized
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 in the workplace. I personally believe that it is helpful for me as a new employee in the company, and I have become more confident now in proceeding with various tasks of the business.
Apart from
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this
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, some colleagues were already familiar with that training course
due to
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 their superior levels and level of work experience, but still, they attended it as a matter of appreciation. I am thankful for your time and support for giving
such
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 informative knowledge. Yours sincerely, Anureet.

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task response
Add a short intro that names the course and its aim, and a short ending that restates your main point.
coherence and cohesion
Keep each paragraph to one main idea. Use link words like also, but, however to show how ideas connect.
language
Fix small grammar and word use: u -> you, allocates -> presents/outlines, informative knowledge -> useful information, and keep a formal tone.
task response
Be more explicit about why the course may not fit for some co workers, with one or two clear reasons.
tone
Polite tone with a respectful opening and closing.
content
The letter says the course was useful to your work.
structure
The letter tries to cover three main points: what the course was about, its usefulness, and how it may not suit all colleagues.
Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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