The graph below shows the different modes of transport used to travel to and from work in one European city in 1960, 1980 and 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
The bar
given
chart illustrates the use of transportation to travel and from work in four different types (train, car, tube and bus) in a certain European city in three different Verb problem
apply
Use synonyms
years-1960
, 1980 and 2000.
Correct your spelling
years- 1960
Overall
, the use of a car showed Linking Words
the
increased trend Correct article usage
an
of
the period, Change preposition
in
while
Linking Words
others
transportation Correct quantifier usage
other
had
fluctuated except for Unnecessary verb
apply
a
bus which Correct article usage
the
was
decreased.
Unnecessary verb
apply
To begin
with, the usage of a car to commute in 1960 was around 7% which was the lowest compared to other transportation modes. Linking Words
Then
, the number tripled in the next 20 Linking Words
years
to 21% and continued Use synonyms
rose
significantly to 35% in 2000. Change the verb form
to rise
In contrast
, in 1960 people who Linking Words
travel
Wrong verb form
travelled
with
Change preposition
by
a
bus Correct article usage
apply
was
the highest Correct subject-verb agreement
were
with
almost 40%, Change preposition
at
Linking Words
however
it decreased significantly in the next 20 Add a comma
however,
years
from around 26% in 1980 to 15% in 2000.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, the usage of a train and tube had fluctuated. In 1960, less than 20% Linking Words
individuals
Change preposition
of individuals
choose
to travel Wrong verb form
chose
with
Change preposition
by
a
train. The percentage grew slightly by 8% in 10 Correct article usage
apply
years
Use synonyms
then
dropped to 25% in 2002. Meanwhile, there was 27% Linking Words
travelers
Change preposition
of travelers
who
used Correct pronoun usage
apply
tube
in 1960. Correct article usage
the tube
Then
, 10 Linking Words
years
later the figure declined slightly by 5% and increased again to 25% in 2000.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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