The map bellow show the chances that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780,1860 and 2000.

The map bellow show the chances that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780,1860 and 2000.
The map illustrates the development that happened in Willington town in 1780,1860 and 2000. Overview, It is noticeable that the number of houses in the area keeps increasing over the period whilst, Farm and trees keep reducing until the end of the period. More developments in terms of infrastructures and public facilities
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built throughout
the
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time. In 1780, The town only had 100 houses which were surrounded by farmlands and woods. In the next 80 years, more accommodations had been built and now the town had 200 homes.
Due to
the increasing number of populations in
the
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Willington, The farm and wood spaces had been reduced to
built
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roads that lead to household communities. Bridge has
also
been built to make people easier to cross the river.
Then
in 2000 when population numbers kept increasing, More homes were built and there were a total of 500 homes during that time. It can be seen that the woods and farms were completely demolished to accommodate more accommodations and public facilities
such
as schools, sports fields, and shops.
Moreover
, the number of highways
also
increased to facilitate the community and
at the end
of the river
also
had been constructed a wetland for birds.
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