The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
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The diagrams illustrate how the
salmon
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, a large fish species, evolves during its life cycle.
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, a
salmon
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's life cycle consists of three main durations, beginning with laying the
salmon
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eggs in slow-moving parts of the
river
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and ending with living adult salmons in the open sea.
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the slow-moving
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river
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, the
salmon
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eggs are placed between small-sized stones near the reeds and
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stage takes approximately five or six months. In the subsequent stage, the eggs turn into fries with less than 8 cm long. Afterwards, they move to a lower
river
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with fast water flowing. After four years of habitation in the lower
river
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, they become larger with a length of 12 to 15 cm and are called smolt. In
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size, they move to the open sea and their life takes about five years there. After the five-year period, salmons rise and become seven times as long as smolts.
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, they return to the upper
river
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to breed and
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cycle continues.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words salmon, river with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "move" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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