The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.
The diagrams illustrate how the
salmon
, a large fish species, evolves during its life cycle.
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Overall
, a Linking Words
salmon
's life cycle consists of three main durations, beginning with laying the Use synonyms
salmon
eggs in slow-moving parts of the Use synonyms
river
and ending with living adult salmons in the open sea.
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To begin
with, in Linking Words
slow-moving
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the slow-moving
a slow-moving
river
, the Use synonyms
salmon
eggs are placed between small-sized stones near the reeds and Use synonyms
this
stage takes approximately five or six months. In the subsequent stage, the eggs turn into fries with less than 8 cm long. Afterwards, they move to a lower Linking Words
river
with fast water flowing.
After four years of habitation in the lower Use synonyms
river
, they become larger with a length of 12 to 15 cm and are called smolt. In Use synonyms
this
size, they move to the open sea and their life takes about five years there. After the five-year period, salmons rise and become seven times as long as smolts. Linking Words
Finally
, they return to the upper Linking Words
river
to breed and Use synonyms
this
cycle continues.Linking Words
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