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The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 2002, 2012 and 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 2002, 2012 and 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts depict information about annual
school
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 expenses in the UK
school
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throughtout
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throughout
 three periods 2002, 2012 and 2022.
Overall
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, teacher salaries represent the highest expenditure compared to the other categories in the three pie charts.
On the other hand
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, the amount
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 on insurance appears to be relatively small.
To begin
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, a large proportion of the
school
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's expenses are allocated to
teache
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teacher
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salries
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salaries
 over the specified periods. There was a dramatic decrease in
school
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 spending from fifteen per cent and 2002 to nine
percent
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 in 2022. Furniture and equipment represented
approxiamtely
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approximately
 fifteen
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percent
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per cent
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 of
school
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 spending in 2002. In 2012, a small percentage, around five
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percent
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per cent
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 was allocated to these items in the total
school
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 spending.
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,
this
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 category saw a sharp increase to twenty-three
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percent
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per cent
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 by the end
2022
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of 2022
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.
Furthermore
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, a small percentage of
school
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 spending
wa
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was
 attributed to insurance. The expense of other
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workers'
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 salaries made up a significant proportion of the
school
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 spending throughout the years, constituting at least a quarter of the total
school
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 spending.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, percent with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "represent" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Annual spending
  • Expenditure categories
  • Allocation
  • Trend analysis
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Budget allocation strategy
  • Inflation-adjusted
  • Future implications
  • Educational institutions
  • Technological resources
  • Maintenance and operations
  • Comparative analysis
  • Fiscal management
  • Resource allocation
  • Strategic planning
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