The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 2002, 2012 and 2022. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 2002, 2012 and 2022.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts depict information about annual
school
expenses in the UK
school
throughtout
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throughout
three periods 2002, 2012 and 2022.
Overall
, teacher salaries represent the highest expenditure compared to the other categories in the three pie charts.
On the other hand
, the amount
spend
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on insurance appears to be relatively small.
To begin
, a large proportion of the
school
's expenses are allocated to
teache
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teacher
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salries
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salaries
over the specified periods. There was a dramatic decrease in
school
spending from fifteen per cent and 2002 to nine
percent
in 2022. Furniture and equipment represented
approxiamtely
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approximately
fifteen
percent
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per cent
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of
school
spending in 2002. In 2012, a small percentage, around five
percent
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per cent
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was allocated to these items in the total
school
spending.
However
,
this
category saw a sharp increase to twenty-three
percent
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per cent
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by the end
2022
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of 2022
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.
Furthermore
, a small percentage of
school
spending
wa
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was
attributed to insurance. The expense of other
workers
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workers'
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salaries made up a significant proportion of the
school
spending throughout the years, constituting at least a quarter of the total
school
spending.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Annual spending
  • Expenditure categories
  • Allocation
  • Trend analysis
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Budget allocation strategy
  • Inflation-adjusted
  • Future implications
  • Educational institutions
  • Technological resources
  • Maintenance and operations
  • Comparative analysis
  • Fiscal management
  • Resource allocation
  • Strategic planning
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