the chart below gives information about how gamilies in once country spen their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018
The given bar chart illustrates the weekly average expenses of families in 1968 and 2018. Values are shown in
percentage
.
Fix the agreement mistake
percentages
Overall
, in 2018 highest expensed
on food Replace the word
expenses
while
the least expensed
for fuel Replace the word
expenses
and
power and personal goods.
In 1968, housing and clothing and Correct word choice
apply
footware
expenses Correct your spelling
footwear
was
similar which was 10%. Change the verb form
were
According to
this
chart food (35%) was the most spend
item in 1968 and leisure (22%) was the most Wrong verb form
spent
spend
item in 2018. For household items both years spent the same Wrong verb form
spent
percentage
of income it was accounted
Wrong verb form
accounting
around
7.5% . In 2018, families used Change preposition
for around
the
similar Correct article usage
a
percentage
from
Change preposition
of
the
income for transport, household and personal goods ( 8%).
When compared 1968 Change the word
their
percentage
of food expense
35% decreased by half in 2018 to 17.5% Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
in contrast
, people spent for leisure in 2018 was doubled which was more than 20%. Housing, transport and leisure expenses have increased in 2018 compared to 1968.
In 1968, fuel was the lowest expense in this
country.Submitted by Sa.inaka on
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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