The diagrams below give information about two road tunnels in two Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagrams below give information about two road tunnels in two Australian cities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagrams show measurements of two tunnels in different Australian cities,
along with
the years of construction and cost.
Overall
, the second
tunnel
was built more recently, with the project costing more
due to
its extended length and width when compared to the
first
tunnel
.
However
, the
first
tunnel
went down deeper than the
first
and took longer to construct. Starting with the
first
tunnel
, the
tunnel
was built under a bridge crossing a river, surrounded by sand. It was built between 1986 to 1998 with a cost of $555 million. The
tunnel
itself consists of 2 car lanes, stretching out for 2.2 kilometres and going 1.5 meters down into the ground. Moving on to the second
tunnel
, it was constructed between 2002 to 2006, taking significantly less time than the
first
tunnel
. The
tunnel
is situated underneath a road in the city, surrounded by mostly stone and clay. The price for
this
tunnel
is $1.1 billion, which provided us with 3.6 km of
tunnel
length and 3 lanes for vehicles. Compared to the
first
tunnel
,
this
one remains relatively flat,
instead
of curving downwards like the
first
one.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tunnel, first with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban infrastructure
  • commuter
  • traffic congestion
  • toll collection system
  • vehicular capacity
  • bi-directional lanes
  • engineering feat
  • innovative design
  • safety measures
  • construction materials
  • ventilation system
  • emergency exits
  • tunnel clearance
  • inauguration date
  • public-private partnership
  • sustainability features
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