You want to sell your laptop. You think a friend of yours might like to to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Explain why you are selling the laptop Discribe the laptop Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it

Dear Sara, I am just writing
letter to you if you are interested in buying my laptop. because I want to sell it.As you know it has not taken too much time that I bought it . Yet unfortunately I have to sell it because I am enrolled in a new course at Stanford University which has too many high expenses .
is a Mac laptop of
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the New
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Face series, a high_teq one with black coloured but I put a red cover on it and you should be sure about its perfect appearance:
,if you want to know more about
gadget, I can send its written information on its booklet as soon as I can. Think about it and call me on Friday afternoon if you like to come and see it ;
,I guess it is a handy and useful tool for your study
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. By
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the way
, we can enjoy our afternoon
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drinking tea or coffee together. your friend, Marry.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure logical progression within paragraphs and across the letter as a whole. Your ideas are somewhat disconnected.
coherence cohesion
Use clear paragraphing to separate different ideas and maintain a single idea per paragraph for clarity.
task achievement
Address all required bullet points in detail, giving each point its own paragraph with full elaboration.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout the letter, considering the relationship with the reader.
coherence cohesion
Pay attention to punctuation, grammar, and sentence structure to enhance the overall readability of your letter.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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