the diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane
The provided diagram illustrates the sequential stages involved in transforming
sugar
cane
into sugar
. This
intricate process consists of seven key steps, necessitating various pieces of equipment for successful sugar
production.
Firstly
, sugar
cane
is cultivated and left to mature for 12 to 18 months. Subsequently
, the matured sugar
cane
undergoes harvesting, achieved either by using a specialized machine or through manual cutting by hand. Following the harvesting process, the sugar
cane
is subjected to a crushing mechanism, resulting in the extraction of juice.
The extracted sugar
cane
juice then
proceeds through a purification stage involving the use of a limestone filter. Once purified, the juice is heated in an evaporator, leading to the formation of a syrupy consistency. The subsequent step involves the separation of sugar
crystals from the syrup, achieved through the utilization of a centrifuge. Finally
, the sugar
is dried and cooled within
a lidless circular tank.Change preposition
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