the diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane
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cane
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cane
undergoes harvesting, achieved either by using a specialized machine or through manual cutting by hand. Following the harvesting process, the Use synonyms
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cane
is subjected to a crushing mechanism, resulting in the extraction of juice.
The extracted Use synonyms
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then
proceeds through a purification stage involving the use of a limestone filter. Once purified, the juice is heated in an evaporator, leading to the formation of a syrupy consistency. The subsequent step involves the separation of Linking Words
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