The chart below shows the changes in three different areas of crime in Manchester city centre from 2003-2012.

The chart below shows the changes in three different areas of crime in Manchester city centre from 2003-2012.
The line graph illustrates the rates of change in three various categories of crime, namely, burglary car theft and robbery in the
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of Manchester over a
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period.* The graph shows
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oil production capacity for several Gulf countries between 1990 and 2010 *The line graph
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an estimate of oil supply capacity for some Middle East countries over a
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period* The table below gives information about consumers spending on different items in five different countries in 2002 *The given illustration provides the data
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on seven various products in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey in 2002*
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