Some people think most crime is the result of circumstances. Otthers believes that most crime is cused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

Some

people

say

series

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of conditions is the reason behind most crime. others

thinks

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bad

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the bad

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nature

of some

people

is the result of most crimes. In

this

essay, I will discuss the

caused

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causes

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behind

of

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apply

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the majority of the crimes and I will provide my point of view. One of the major

cause

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causes

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of crime is parenting.

This

is because parenting will build and shape the personality of a person,

this

is not only

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the parents

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parents

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parents'

parent's

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responsiblity

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responsibility

also

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but also

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the school

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school

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.

Moreover

,

Parents

are responsible

to teach

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for teaching

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and

educate

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educating

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their children at home, but most of the kids

time

at

school

with their teachers and friends. To illustrate,

in

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these days, children

not

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do not

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have

time

with their

parents

at home, because they are busy

at

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with

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their work most of the

time

, and

this

will lead

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leads

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their kids to go out and meet with bad

people

.

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, during

my

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high

school

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school,

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I met and

make

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made

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a lot of friends, and I

witness

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witnessed

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some of my friends

are

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apply

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changing over

the

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apply

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time

, at first they

start

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started

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smoking

then

they

start

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started

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to

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drinking alcohol

then

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started

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start

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avoid coming to

school

.

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is because their

parents

did not give

enough

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them enough

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time

to spend with them.

On the other hand

, some think there is bad

nature

on

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in

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people

.

This

is because when someone

have

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a

criminial

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criminal

record and some members of his family or if he or she

have

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has

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the same

nationalitiy

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nationality

nationalities

also

have

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apply

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,

that

is mean

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means

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this

family have a bad

nature

.

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, Pablo

Oscobar

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Escobar

what of the biggest drug dealer

on

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in

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the

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history, many

people

thinks

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think

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most

of

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apply

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the

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apply

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colombian

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Colombian

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people

are drug dealers or

they

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have no problem

to smoke

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smoking

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weed or

have

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apply

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a drug,

this

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but this

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is not true, because I have a lot of

colombian

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Colombian

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friend

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friends

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and they don't like it and they are health

people

. In my opinion, I believe nobody porn in

this

world with bad

nature

on them, bad

nature

will

acquired

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be acquired

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over the years,

because

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because of

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a series of circumstances

on

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in

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the

person

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person's

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life. In conclusion,

while

some

thinks

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think

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criminal

people

gains

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gain

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their criminality from

as

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a

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series

fo

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of

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life conditions, others believe it is some

people

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people's

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nature

. I believe some

people

gains

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gain

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crime from

school

and

neglection

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neglect

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from their

parents

.