The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.
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The three charts below provide
the
information concerning the Correct article usage
apply
value
in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009. The data can be divided into two groups, namely the number that experienced upward trend
and downtrends. Figures are given in billion dollars.
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trends
Overall
it can be clearly seen that,
the number of Remove the comma
apply
exports
with China in 2009 is the highest value
and the number of imports
with China in 2004 is the lowest value
over the given charts.
To begin
with the value
of trade with China, the exports
and imports
value
starting
at about 10-20 in 2004 before moderately Wrong verb form
started
increased
to 30-35 in 2009 which is the Wrong verb form
increasing
hightest
Correct your spelling
highest
value
over the following 5 years. It is interesting that the rate
of exports
and imports
with Japan starting at the same level which is around 20 in 2009. After that, the exports
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export
rate
grew significantly into
30 in 2009 Change preposition
to
whereas
the imports
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import
rate
remain
at the same level in the same year.
Moving on to the trade with Wrong verb form
remained
United
Correct article usage
the United
states
, the Capitalize word
States
value
of exports
and imports
starting
at 10 and 20 respectively in 2004. Wrong verb form
started
Then
, the rate
remained approxiamtely
at the same level in 2009.Correct your spelling
approximately
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