The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below.

The three charts below provide

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information concerning the

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in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009. The data can be divided into two groups, namely the number that experienced upward

trend

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and downtrends. Figures are given in billion dollars.

Overall

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it can be clearly seen that

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the number of

exports

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with China in 2009 is the highest

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and the number of

imports

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with China in 2004 is the lowest

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over the given charts.

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with the

value

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of trade with China, the

exports

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and

imports

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value

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starting

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at about 10-20 in 2004 before moderately

increased

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to 30-35 in 2009 which is the

hightest

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highest

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over the following 5 years. It is interesting that the

rate

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of

exports

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and

imports

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with Japan starting at the same level which is around 20 in 2009. After that, the

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exports

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rate

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grew significantly

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30 in 2009

whereas

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the

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imports

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rate

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remain

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at the same level in the same year. Moving on to the trade with

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states

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, the

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of

exports

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and

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starting

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at 10 and 20 respectively in 2004.

Then

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, the

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remained

approxiamtely

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approximately

at the same level in 2009.