The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The given two tables provide detailed data about the selling of fair trade-labelled
coffee
and bananas during the 5 years
period starting from 1999 in five different European countries.
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5-year
Overall
, it can be seen that Correct article usage
the informations
informations
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information
pieces of information
of
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in
table
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the table
illustrate
that Correct subject-verb agreement
illustrates
sales
of coffee
in the UK went up moderately while
Sweden rose faintly, whereas
another feature of data
sold is that Correct article usage
the data
sales
of bananas in Switzerland developed noticeably when Denmark fell.
To begin
with, sales
of coffee
in the UK started at 1.5 millions
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million
of
euros, Change preposition
apply
after
some years, Correct word choice
and after
last
transaction of Change the article
the last
coffee
increased to the
20 Correct article usage
apply
million
of money. Alternatively, it is clear that
Sweden started the time with 0.8 million
euros and ended up making 0.2 million
of
European currency.
The remaining banana Change preposition
in
sales
channels in Switzerland have seen a sharp rise, going from 15 to 47 million
funds. Conversely
, Denmark has seen a minor decline, going from 2 to 0.9 million
euros.Submitted by dnm.best on
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