The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
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The given two tables provide detailed data about the selling of fair trade-labelled
coffee
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and bananas during the
5 years
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5-year
period starting from 1999 in five different European countries.
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, it can be seen that
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the informations
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informations
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information
pieces of information
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of
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in
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table
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illustrate
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illustrates
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that
sales
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of
coffee
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in the UK went up moderately
while
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Sweden rose faintly,
whereas
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another feature of
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the data
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sold is that
sales
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of bananas in Switzerland developed noticeably when Denmark fell.
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with,
sales
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of
coffee
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in the UK started at 1.5
millions
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million
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of
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apply
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euros,
after
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and after
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some years,
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last
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transaction of
coffee
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increased to
the
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apply
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20
million
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of money. Alternatively,
it is clear that
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Sweden started the time with 0.8
million
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euros and ended up making 0.2
million
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of
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European currency. The remaining banana
sales
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channels in Switzerland have seen a sharp rise, going from 15 to 47
million
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funds.
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, Denmark has seen a minor decline, going from 2 to 0.9
million
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euros.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, sales, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade sales
  • significant growth
  • trends and patterns
  • market expansion
  • sustainable consumption
  • ethical products
  • consumer awareness
  • economic impact
  • percentage increase
  • market share
  • profit margins
  • trade initiatives
  • consumer behavior
  • retail figures
  • economic indicators
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