The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016.
The presented line graph illustrates the comparison of the weekly visits of patients in four different categories of hospitals between 2010 and 2016.
Firstly
, in 2010 around 240 patients visited birth control and this
number rose steadily to approximately 280 by 2012 but since this
period the amount of medical examinations dropped to less than 200 in 2014 . However
, increasing
observed again in 2016 , at nearly 240 . Wrong verb form
an increase was
In contrast
, visits to the doctor concerning eye issues started lower at 125, slowly expanded over the next two years and culminated at 350 visitors .
Secondly
, appointment
to Fix the agreement mistake
appointments
dentist
beginning at 60 slowly grew to under 100 and finishing with sharply expanded to 175 . Fix the agreement mistake
dentists
Additionally
, the number of diabetic visitors checked up was
fell to half in 2012 but recovered in the next two years at 125 and gradually picked up below 150 .
Looking from an Unnecessary verb
apply
overall
perspective , it is noticeable that the number of patients at the four clinics increased for all types of visits except for birth control which was unchanged .Submitted by abdurahimov03 on
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