Every year more and more students choose to study online rather than attend classes on campus. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

During the covid-19 many
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have
using
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the
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online
lessons
to replace the
face
to
face
lessons
2 years ago. After the covid everything returned to
be
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normal,
however
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there are many
students
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who perfer
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perfer
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prefer
having online
lessons
. Some may confused it, should the
face
to
face
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more
advanages
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advantages
advantageous
to
studnts
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students
,
such
as
can meet
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friends, more attention and
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the
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question
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immedately
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immediately
.
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my opinion there are three reasons to causes it, let explain
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below.
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First
of all, online
leaason
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learning
can
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the
time
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they
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. As
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face to
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campas
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campus
,
students
will take more
time
to dress up themselves and the traffic
time
based on the distance
betwwen
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between
campas
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campus
and their
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homes
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home
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. To save
time
, online
lessons
is
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better, as it did not
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required
require
us to go to
school
and no need to
face
other
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the internet
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internet
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, they will
less
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be less
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likely
care
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their
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image.
Second,
the exam will
hold
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in
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online,
students
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and students
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can open
book
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the book
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exam. Even
the
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scool
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school
required
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students
should open the
carmer
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camera
during the
examation
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examination
,
students
have a many
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ways
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to open
book
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books
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or
being
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copy
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a copy
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cat.
Students
will
eaily
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easily
to
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apply
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get a
hige
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higher
range even
they
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if they
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have not
review
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anything.
Third,
students
can do
other thing
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when
the
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they
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are having
lessons
like playing
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on moblie
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moblie
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mobile
phone
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phones
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. As many
lessons
would not
required
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be required
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students
open
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the carmer,
teacher
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the teacher
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did not know what they
are
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doing. They may go
shpping
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shopping
, gaming or sleeping, it is free in the online
lessons
.
Therefore
, there are two
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solutions
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to solve it.
First,
requied
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required
students
must open the carmer during the
lessons
. When the teacher can monitor them,
students
will focus on the
lessons
.
Second,
cut the online
lessons
, as there are some
disadvantage
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disadvantages
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of online
lessons
to
students
.
School
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Schools
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should using the
face
to
face
lessons
, when they back to
achool
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school
they can meet their friends and more attention to the
lessons
. It is benifical to stidents.
To sum up
, the reasons
of
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students
choose online
lessons
rather than
face to
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face-to-face
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face
lessons
beacses
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because
beaches
of
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to
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save
time
, online
exam
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exams
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and not focus on the
lessons
. These will make
students
become lazy, and
the
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acdcemic
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academic
grade will decrease.
Thus
the
school
should
reauired
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require
required
students
open
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to open
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camer when they are having
the
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apply
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online
lessons
or the
school
can cut the online
lesssons
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lessons
to change the
face to
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face-to-face
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face
teaching mode.
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  • cost-effectiveness
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  • technological advancements
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  • viable alternative
  • global access
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