The chart below shows th persentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

The chart below shows th persentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011
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The bar chart illustrates the changes in the percentage of households in owned and rented
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in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. It is evident that in 1918, rented
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dominated, accounting for approximately 80%,
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was represented by a mere 20%.
However
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, by 2011, a significant shift had occurred, with owned
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constituting approximately 70% of households, marking a substantial increase and surpassing rented
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. Between 1918 and 2011, the figure for rented
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underwent a dramatic decline, dropping to approximately 40% by the end of the period.
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, owned
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experienced a notable surge, rising to approximately 70%. A notable trend is observed in the years leading up to 1971, wherein a decline in rented
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paralleled a rise in households opting for owned
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, a pattern that began in 1961.
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