The table below shows population figures for 4 countries for 2003 and projected figures for 2025 and 2050.

The table below shows population figures for 4 countries for 2003 and projected figures for 2025 and 2050.
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The given table represents the changes in population for 4 countries
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2003 and estimated data for 2025 and 2025.
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, all figures have been an upward trend.
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, Italy has decreased slightly from 2003 to 2050 and Indonesia is the most resident of 4 countries. As is shown in the illustration, from 2003 to 2025, Indonesia rose dramatically from 238
million
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to 274
million
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. For Italy, which fell from 54
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to 47
million
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. In 2003, Argentina and the Republic of Korea, which had
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number
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of citizens, were 34
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and 48
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respectively. In 2025, Argentina and the Republic of Korea increased by 12
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and about 4
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respectively .
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next 25 years, Indonesia will continue to grow by 38
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(312
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), the highest data in 48 years. Italy can still decline to 45
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, the lowest
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in 2050. Argentina will rise slowly by 14
million
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. The Republic of Korea could remain stable with 52
million
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words million with synonyms.
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