the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. summarize the information and make comparison. wrtie at least 150 words.
The provided pie charts offer insights into the age distribution of Yemen and Italy's populations in 2000,
as well as
projections for 2050. In 2000, Yemen's population was predominantly composed of individuals
aged 0-14 years
(50.1%), followed by those aged 15-59 years
(46.3%), and lastly
, individuals
aged 60 and above (3.6%). Conversely
, Italy's population in 2000 was mainly comprised of individuals
aged 15-59 years
(61.6%), followed by those aged 60 and above (24.1%), and lastly
, individuals
aged 0-14 years
(14.3%). Looking ahead to the projection for 2050, Yemen's population is anticipated to see a decrease in the percentage
of individuals
aged 0-14 years
to 37%, while
the percentage
of those aged 15-59 years
is projected to increase to 57.3%, and the percentage
of individuals
aged 60 and above is expected to rise to 5.7%. Similarly
, Italy's projection for 2050 indicates a decrease in the percentage
of individuals
aged 0-14 years
to 11.5%, with an increase in the percentage
of those aged 15-59 years
to 61.6%, and a notable increase in the percentage
of individuals
aged 60 and above to 42.3%.Submitted by ru.kabiru.biru on
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