The pie chart illustrates the proportion of persons who are captured and the bar chart illustrates the reason why they are captured in the five years ending 1994 .
The pie chart depicts the percentage of people who are captured and the bar diagram shows why they are captured for seven reasons.
Overall
, men
are arrested more than women
and both have the same highest reason.
It is clear that
the proportion of arrests by women
and men
is 9% and 32%, while
public drinking is the highest factor to cause
humans to be arrested, which is around 38% and 30% by females and males.
Wrong verb form
causes
Furthermore
, drunk driving is the second reason, while
the rate of men
is higher than women
by over 12%. Moreover
, the crime rate by other circumstances which is related to breach of the order, theft and other reason is lower than 20%, and both of them are around 17%, 16% and 19% respectively by men
beyond women
. However
, there is no idea why individuals get into jail, which is approximately 7% and 4% in the group of girls and boys.Submitted by af231186 on
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