The chart below shows global sales of the top five mobile phone brands between 2009 and 2013.

The

privided

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provided

bar chart presents the global

sales

of five popular

moblie

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mobile

phone bands from 2009 to 2013.

Overall

, it can be seen that the most popular band was

Nokia

, followed by

Samsung

while

ZTE and Apple

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the less popular at the beginning.

Moreover

,

Samsung

, Apple and ZTE experienced an upward trend in comparison

Nokia

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and LG followed

a

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downward trend in the

survered

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survey

years.

To begin

with, the most popular mobile band was

Nokia

with almost 450

of

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apply

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sales

which is

a

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double

of

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Samsung

in 2009. There was a

minior

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minor

fall

of

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in

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Nokia

's

sales

in 2011 and

it

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its

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sales

plunge

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to 250

dollars

per year

whereas

Samsung

continued

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grow and

peak

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peaked

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at 450

dollars

in

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the end of

period

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.

On the other hand

, Apple started

around

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at around

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25

dollars

and 6 times rose to 150

dollars

in 2013

also

ZTE grew

slighty

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slightly

to over 50

dollars

at the end

while

the

sales

of LG decreased from about 120

dollars

to 80

dollars

during the years.