You are preparing an event in the countryside. Write a letter to your friend and ask for help with the arrangements. What the event is. Why the event is being held? What arrangements have already been made? How your friend can help?

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Dear friend, I am writing

this

letter to let you know that I'm arranging an event in my place, for the next week. I remembered that you are amazing when it comes to making people excited with whatever it is and, with that, you are my go-to choice when it comes to getting

this

right.

This

event of mine will act like a boot camp of sorts for people around the neighbourhood. It is intended to give attendees some perspective and clarification about our role when it comes to trash recycling

while

having some fun. Given that, in two weeks, the city hall will be evaluating citizens' recycling practices, I definitely believe

this

event to be of utter importance; even more that it may result in a fee if they conclude that our practices aren't as desired. It is important for you to know that I have already made some arrangements. I bought different types of recycling bins and cleaned up my front yard to act as our meeting place.

Thus

, I'm hoping that you'll assist me in getting everyone's attendance. Your help would be much appreciated, I hope you can make it. Best wishes, Carlos.

Submitted by Danarvelini on Sun Dec 03 2023

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coherence cohesion

Ensure clarity when transitioning between ideas for improved coherence. Transition phrases and topic sentences will aid this.

task achievement

Provide more detailed information about the specific help needed from your friend for better task achievement.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

196 words

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