The maps below show the changes in a school from 1985 to the present time.
The two maps illustrate the noticeable changes in one
school
from 1985 to the present time. Use synonyms
Overall
, the first map shows the layout of the Linking Words
school
in 1985, Use synonyms
while
the second map describes the current layout after a development presented an increase in Linking Words
school
population and new facilities in the Use synonyms
school
.
In 1985, there were 1,500 students. There was a square Use synonyms
car
Use synonyms
park
surrounded by the road which was located at the north of the Use synonyms
school
and was connected with the northwest entrance and the northeast exit. In the eastern part of the Use synonyms
school
, there was a classroom block with two levels. The playing field was on location in the south-side area, Use synonyms
while
buildings including an office, a library, a small Linking Words
car
Use synonyms
park
, and classrooms were located on the western side.
At present time, the proportion of students has significantly increased to 2,300 students. The Use synonyms
car
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park
situated in the north remains, but the size is slightly smaller. The classroom located at the east has been renovated with the addition of a third storey and there are additional classrooms at the side. In the south, the playing field has been converted to a smaller size Use synonyms
whereas
the left part was demolished to build new facilities including with pool, fitness centre, and classrooms. The office remains in the western area, Linking Words
in contrast
, the small Linking Words
car
Use synonyms
park
and the classroom were demolished. The library was converted into a learning resources centre with a computer room.Use synonyms
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