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Many developing countries are currently expanding their tourist industries. Why is this the case? It is a positive or negative development?

#countries #tourist #industries #case #development
In
the
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modern times, many developing
countries
 all over the world tend to
largen
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 and promote their
tourist
industries
. There are some realistic reasons
of
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this
 issue; personally,
however
, I think
this
 is a negative development for
this
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this country
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countries
 themselves. On the one hand, there are several factors to develop the
tourist
industries
 in developing
countries
.
To begin
 with, it can meet the local people’s job demands. To explain,
this
 type of industry requires a large amount of people,
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 people who have no experience. That very nature benefits people’s life
condition
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 by having
on
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 occupation and decreases
the
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unemployment in some
countries
 which are on the way to
develop
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.
In addition
,
tourist
industries
 help
that
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countries
 develop their own economy. When the amount of visitors rapidly, it means they can promote their income sources by serving them the facilities and collecting the taxes.
On the other hand
,
besides
 some of the reasons above, it seems to me that it is still a negative development in some
countries
. The top idea of these nations depends much on the flow of tourism. To illustrate
this
, in the year
of
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2020,
the
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Vietnam’s economy reported a
decreased
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 of 79%
income
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 because of
the
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Covid-19
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COVID-19
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. It demonstrated that
tourist
industries
is
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 not
a
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suitable to expand and concentrate on.
Moreover
, it can directly influence the environment.
In particular
, many
of
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the
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tourism
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tourists
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 tend to throw away their rubbish in
the
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normal places
instead
 of in recycling places. It can affect the
eco-system
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ecosystem
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 by the mountain of litter
being
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. In conclusion, some developing
countries
 nowadays concentrate on expanding the
tourist
industries
because of
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 some reasons.
However
, I still claim the idea that it is
still
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a negative development for
themselves
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them
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.
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