The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.

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The map depicts the layout of the public library two decades ago and the current look.

Overall

, 20 years ago there were only rooms with

books

, so there were no facilities but tables and chairs for reading and studying. (предложение правильное, но написано чуть запутано) The central library of 20 years ago had 4 main rooms which

are

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were

reading

Correct article usage

a reading

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room

, an enquiry desk, children’s

books

and

multimedia

Correct article usage

a multimedia

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room

, meanwhile adult fiction and non-fiction

books

on in the hallway. For people’s

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convenience

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conveniences

Add a comma

conveniences,

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there were only tables and chairs. Today,

this

library has a lot of services for its readers. The enquiry desk and reading

room

were converted into a cafe and computer

room

, respectively. Another striking change is tables and chairs were removed from the main hall,

additionally

on the right of the main hall

established

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an information desk and self-service machines were established.

Also

children's

Correct article usage

the children's

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books

room

was transformed into a lecture

room

, in the same way the multimedia

room

was constructed for storytelling events and children’s fiction

books

. On the left side of the main

hallall

Correct your spelling

hall

hall all

, the adult fiction

books

section was replaced with all reference

books

while

adult non-fiction

books

on the next side of the hall remained the same way.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, room with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

205 words

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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layout
modern technology
computer stations
multimedia room
multi-purpose spaces
conference rooms
study spaces
community-oriented services
accessibility
wider aisles
ramps
designated areas
people with disabilities
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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.

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