The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.
The map depicts the layout of the public library two decades ago and the current look.
Overall
, 20 years ago there were only rooms with books
, so there were no facilities but tables and chairs for reading and studying. (предложение правильное, но написано чуть запутано)
The central library of 20 years ago had 4 main rooms which are
were Verb problem
apply
reading
Correct article usage
a reading
room
, an enquiry desk, children’s books
and multimedia
Correct article usage
a multimedia
room
, meanwhile adult fiction and non-fiction books
on in the hallway. For people’s Fix the agreement mistake
convenience
conveniences
there were only tables and chairs.
Today, Add a comma
conveniences,
this
library has a lot of services for its readers. The enquiry desk and reading room
were converted into a cafe and computer room
, respectively. Another striking change is tables and chairs were removed from the main hall, additionally
on the right of the main hall established
an information desk and self-service machines were established. Verb problem
apply
Also
, children's
Correct article usage
the children's
books
room
was transformed into a lecture room
, in the same way the multimedia room
was constructed for storytelling events and children’s fiction books
. On the left side of the main hallall
, the adult fiction Correct your spelling
hall
hall all
books
section was replaced with all reference books
, while
adult non-fiction books
on the next side of the hall remained the same way.Submitted by forcookiearu on
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