Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.
It is claimed that some occupations which are similar for all
countries
with standard functions (like doctors, teachers, engineers ect
) can Correct your spelling
etc
work
in any place they want. Others consider that because of
many reasons Change preposition
for
such
professionals should work
in only one country
where they get education
.
Add an article
an education
First
opinion allows professionals to move to another Change the article
The first
country
. I agree with this
opinion, as in the modern world nobody can restrict moving to another place and work
there. The main factor
for considering people to Fix the agreement mistake
factors
work
should be education, qualification and motivation to work
, but not nationality and country
they come from. Otherwise
, it would be discrimination, that
is not normal Correct pronoun usage
which
especially
for democratic Add the comma(s)
, especially
countries
, such
as Norway, Canada, Finland and so on. Moreover
, such
movements allow the development of certain spheres in different countries
, because people can bring new knowledge, technologies and experience from more-developed countries
to less-developed ones.
However
, all countries
may have different medical systems and rules that regulate certain spheres in a country
. Hence
, the government can require passing additional exams from candidates from other countries
. For example
, the USA has such
a system, in order to become a doctor in America a person should learn again even if they got an education in their countries
.
In conclusion, I would like to say that governments should not make restrictions which do not allow people to move and Fix the agreement mistake
country
work
abroad. Moreover
, such
moves can give many benefits to countries
’ development. At the same time, if the government of a certain country
considers professionals from other places should know some rules, which are important for working, then
workers should learn all necessary and pass required exams.Submitted by ddoiron on
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introduction conclusion present
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logical structure
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relevant specific examples
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supported main points
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complete response
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Your opinion
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