Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish.

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It is claimed that some occupations which are similar for all
countries
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with standard functions (like doctors, teachers, engineers
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etc
) can
work
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in any place they want. Others consider that because
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many reasons
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professionals should
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in only one
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where they get
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.
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opinion allows professionals to move to another
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. I agree with
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opinion, as in the modern world nobody can restrict moving to another place and
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there. The main
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for considering people to
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should be education, qualification and motivation to
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, but not nationality and
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they come from.
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, it would be discrimination,
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is not normal
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for democratic
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,
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as Norway, Canada, Finland and so on.
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,
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movements allow the development of certain spheres in different
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, because people can bring new knowledge, technologies and experience from more-developed
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to less-developed ones.
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, all
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may have different medical systems and rules that regulate certain spheres in a
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.
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, the government can require passing additional exams from candidates from other
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.
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, the USA has
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a system, in order to become a doctor in America a person should learn again even if they got an education in their
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countries
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. In conclusion, I would like to say that governments should not make restrictions which do not allow people to move and
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abroad.
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,
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moves can give many benefits to
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’ development. At the same time, if the government of a certain
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considers professionals from other places should know some rules, which are important for working,
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workers should learn all necessary and pass required exams.
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introduction conclusion present
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clear comprehensive ideas
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supported main points
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complete response
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Your opinion

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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