In order to properly learn a foreign language, it is necessary to live in a county where that language is spoken. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

It is common when someone
want
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to learn
new
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a new
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language
in
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at
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a good level, it is better to travel abroad
in
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to
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a country with
this
language
as
native
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a native
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.
this
essay
disagree
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with
this
statement because of two reasons. First of all,
studing
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studying
something new needs a desire. Second of all, in modern times there are a variety of possibilities to learn languages
staying
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while staying
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at home.
Desire
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to
recieve
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receive
new knowledge and improve skills is very important in a study way, especially in learning languages. Despite
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being
ovearseas
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overseas
surounded
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surrounded
by people who speak
foreign
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a foreign
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language
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languages
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, it might be hard to learn new without wishing.
For instance
, there are a
big
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large
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quantity of urban citizens abroad
which
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who
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get
along with
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a local
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community of native speakers only.
Such
of persons might achieve some base level in learning
language
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a language
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,
wich
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which
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is enough to communicate in shops or restaurants.
Although
they are inside different
culture
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cultures
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, lots of them don't even want to continue
study
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studying
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.
Nowdays
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Nowadays
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, we all have access to the internet and a huge range of mobile apps.
For example
, there are a lot of online courses, where a student can learn
language
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a language
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with native speakers.
On the other hand
, free mobile apps are accessible through a cell phone.
As a result
, learning foreign languages is easy for everyone who wants to. There
is
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a lot of online
isntruments
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instruments
, including AI, that might help to
acvieve
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achieve
an excellent level of
proffiency
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proficiency
. In conclusion, in my
opinion
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it
not
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is not
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necessary to leave your home country. Everything a person might need is a necessary amount of desire. In the era of the internet, we have a lot of
sourceis
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sources
source is
online and apps, that help to learn
language
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the language
a language
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.
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