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In order to properly learn a foreign language, it is necessary to live in a county where that language is spoken. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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It is common when someone
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 to learn
new
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a new
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language
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in
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 a good level, it is better to travel abroad
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 a country with
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language
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a native
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.
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disagree
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 with
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 statement because of two reasons. First of all,
studing
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studying
 something new needs a desire. Second of all, in modern times there are a variety of possibilities to learn languages
staying
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while staying
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 at home.
Desire
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The desire
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 to
recieve
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receive
 new knowledge and improve skills is very important in a study way, especially in learning languages. Despite
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being
ovearseas
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overseas
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surrounded
 by people who speak
foreign
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a foreign
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, it might be hard to learn new without wishing.
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, there are a
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 quantity of urban citizens abroad
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 get
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local
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a local
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 community of native speakers only.
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 of persons might achieve some base level in learning
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a language
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,
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which
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 is enough to communicate in shops or restaurants.
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 they are inside different
culture
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cultures
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, lots of them don't even want to continue
study
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studying
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.
Nowdays
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Nowadays
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, we all have access to the internet and a huge range of mobile apps.
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, there are a lot of online courses, where a student can learn
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a language
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 with native speakers.
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, free mobile apps are accessible through a cell phone.
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, learning foreign languages is easy for everyone who wants to. There
is
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 a lot of online
isntruments
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instruments
, including AI, that might help to
acvieve
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achieve
 an excellent level of
proffiency
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proficiency
. In conclusion, in my
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 it
not
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is not
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 necessary to leave your home country. Everything a person might need is a necessary amount of desire. In the era of the internet, we have a lot of
sourceis
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sources
source is
 online and apps, that help to learn
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the language
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.

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coherence cohesion
Ensure that your essay has a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs, and conclusion, each serving their specific purpose.
coherence cohesion
Main points should be introduced, explained, and concluded logically, and ensure paragraph structure supports the argument being made without causing confusion.
task achievement
It's important to address the task directly throughout the essay, consistently reflecting upon the statement given and developing the argument.
task achievement
Your ideas need to be clear and fully developed rather than just stated. Each paragraph should elaborate on the idea presented to give a comprehensive argument.
task achievement
Utilize specific examples to support your points where relevant; this adds weight to your argument and demonstrates a practical understanding of the topic.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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