The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information
The given diagram shows the method by which instant noodles are manufactured.
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, the operation can be divided into eight stages, starting with storing all the raw ingredients
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the silos and finishing with labelling and sealing the cups. The production begins when the flour to be used for making instant noodles is stored in cylindrical towers after being shipped by truck. After that, the flour
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into
mixer
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,
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then
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blended
together with
a combination of water and oil. Once the dough has been perfectly blended, it comes out through the rollers and formed into long dough sheets.
Subsequently
, these sheets are stripped by a factory machine into separate long pieces of dough. In the following stage, these strips are moulded into noodle discs which are ready for the deep frying process with coconut oil, and left
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to dry.
Next,
the noodles are packed into different cups
along with
dry vegetables and secret spices. The process ends with labelling and sealing the packages, so the product will be ready for purchase.
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