You should spend around 20 minutes on this task. The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend around 20 minutes on this task. 

The diagrams below give information on transport and car use in Edmonton. 

Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 

Write at least 150 words.
The pie chart illustrates the usage rates of four kinds of transport in the city of Edmonton,
while
the table provides the results of a survey about the reasons why people prefer
cars
.
Overall
, it is obvious that
cars
are the most common type of transportation in the given city and the most mentioned reason to use automobiles is commuting to work
in contrast
to other motives.
Cars
are used more by the citizens of Edmonton, as 45% of the local population uses
this
variation of
cars
.
In contrast
, the second most commonly preferred option for locals is the LRT (35%). The remaining 20% is taxis and buses. As written earlier, commuting to work is the most mentioned reason by those who use
cars
in the city of Edmonton. To be specific, 55% of respondents used
this
motive
as
Correct word choice
apply
show examples
to explain
they
Rephrase
why they
show examples
prefer
cars
. ‘Business’ (45%) and ‘taking children to school’ (40%) were
also
mentioned frequently by the users of
cars
,
whereas
reasons
such
as ‘shopping’ and ‘leisure’ were noted with lower frequencies both being mentioned by 15% of the participant, respectively.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in contrast".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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