The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average numbers of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

This

graph indicates the average monthly temperature in three metropolises which are London, New York, and Sydney.

Moreover

, the given table illustrates

total

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the total

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hours

that the weather is sunny in

mentioned

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major cities. It is clearly evident that Sydney is a warm area

in

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from

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January until March with 25

degree

, but it gets colder month by month till July when the

temporature

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temperature

temperatures

reach

to

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15. Meanwhile,

this

number slightly

increase

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increases

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in the next months and

finally

,

turn

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turns

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back to its previous ratio which is 25.

Further

,

while

London is

chilly

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city

in January, it becomes warmer until July with approximately 24

degree

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degrees

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.

This

number falls significantly again and turns back to nine

degree

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degrees

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in December. What's more,

however

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NY is an icy region in the christmas, but it becomes by far the hottest

city

in July and reaches a peak at 30

degree

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degrees

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.

Suprisingly

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Surprisingly

,

this

amount significantly decreases during the upcoming months and becomes the most freezing

city

in the

last

month of the year with merely five

degree

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degrees

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.

Last

but not least, the annual glint of sunshine in NY is more than

other

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in other

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cities with 2,535

hours

.

Although

, Syndey with a marginal difference is in the second grade with 2,473

hours

,

but

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it has about 2000

hours

more sunshine than London with just 1180.

Overall

, it is crystal clear that Sydney is the hottest

city

with a high range of sunrise.

Additinally

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Additionally

, NY in spite of long

hours

of sunshine, is the coldest

city

in

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at

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the beginning and end of the year.