The charts below give information about the amount of electricity used.  Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below give information about the amount of electricity used. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph and the pie chart show data about the amount of
electricity
used.
Overall
, the daily
demand
for
electricity
in winter is higher than in summer.
In addition
, the percentage of
electricity
used for heating rooms, and heating water is the highest, meanwhile, the proportion lowest is used for lighting, TV, radio and vacuum cleaners, food mixers, and electric tools. A deep analysis of the line graph provided reveals in winter the
demand
for
electricity
rose slightly on the 3rd of the month at about 40000, and decreased rapidly between the 6th and 9th of the month at about 30000;
however
, the
demand
for
electricity
reached a peak at around 47000 on about 22nd. Meanwhile, the
demand
for
electricity
in summer is a period of slight volatility, reaching a peak at 20000 on about the 14th and reaching a peak lower at about 20000 on around the 23rd of the month. It is noticeable that the proportion of
electricity
used for heating rooms, and heating machines is the highest at 52.5%.
In contrast
, the
electricity
used for lighting, TV, and radio is the lowest just at 15% and it has the same percentage as the
electricity
used for vacuum cleaners, food mixers, and electric tools.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, demand with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Electricity consumption
  • Kilowatt-hours (kWh)
  • Energy demand
  • Power grid
  • Renewable energy sources
  • Non-renewable energy sources
  • Sustainable consumption
  • Conservation efforts
  • Industrial sector
  • Residential sector
  • Commercial sector
  • Fluctuation
  • Year-over-year comparison
  • Efficiency improvements
  • Seasonal variation
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