The bar chart illustrates the number of years at school of two sex in Singaporean, whereas the pie chart depicts the educational levels between 2000 to 2010.
The charts illustrate expenditure and the percentage of students who achieved degree and diploma qualifications in higher education in Singapore during the period of 2000 and 2012.
Overall
, it is noticeable from the bar chart that the expenses for boys and girls increase and the proportion of diploma qualifications is higher than a degree.
A deep analysis of the bar chart provided reveals that the cost spending for boys was about 10 million
USD in 2000 and increased sharply three times and reached a peak at over 30 million
USD in 2012, while
the expenses for girls are lower at about 8 million
in 2000 and fluctuated from 2004 to 2008 and increased more than double at 20 million
USD in 2012.
It can be seen from the pie chart that diplomas took the highest proportion at 73% in 2000 and reduced to 68% in 2012, while
the percentage of degrees was 27% and increased to 32% in 2012.Submitted by yeshomeclass on
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