The maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2005 and the present day. Summarize the information by selecting the main features, and make comparisons.
The map illustrates the changes
of
the art Change preposition
in
gallery
over an 18-year period between 2005 and now.
Overall
, the eastern wing remains intact and the western wing undergoes striking transformations. The art gallery
bonus is the ramp for wheelchairs.
In 2005, the eastern wing included exhibition
rooms 1, 2, 3
from the door. Right behind the Correct word choice
and 3
entrance
was the reception in the middle of the room
. On the north end, there were stairs. In the west of the entrance
, there was the exhibition
room
4, the biggest room
in the gallery
. The cafe was in the North-Western corner of the gallery
.
At present, the art galleries aren’t just for displaying products. It is a bonus device to serve the visitors. It creates a feeling of comfort and convenience for viewers. The eastern wing remains unchanged. Outside the entrance
is a ramp for wheelchairs useful for the disabled. The exhibition
room
4 in the South-Western corner is converted into the Children's area and Temporary Exhibition
. The vending machine is in place of the gallery
office. And the gallery
shop makes way for the cafe in the North-Western corner. The stairs in the north end are smaller and next to bonus lifts. The reception in the middle moves towards the entrance
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