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Band 7.5

You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write letter to your friend. In your letter: —Describe why are you having a party —Give directions on how to get to the venue —suggest how you can accommodate him/her Write at least 150 words. You do not need to write any addresses

#party #friend #city #—describe #—give #directions #venue #—suggest #addresses
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Dear Samson, I hope
this
 letter finds you in radiant health and you are doing well. I am writing
this
 letter to invite you to my home as I am going to arrange a
party
 on the 1st of May, 2024. First of all, I have planned to organise
this
party
 on the occasion of celebrating my promotion. As you know, I have been working in a multinational company as a human resource manager since 2018. I am over the moon as recently I got promoted to senior manager in the human resource department.
Secondly
, I would like to give some information about the location of the venue so that you can attend the program easily. The name of the venue is "Time Square Community Center" which is quite near the airport. From the airport, it will take only 10 minutes of walking to reach the venue. Since it is a kind of get-together
party
, I have invited my other friends
also
 to enjoy the
party
.
This
 is because
,
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 I have booked a total of 10 double-bed rooms in the Hotel Paragon which provides best-in-class services for their guests. I hope you will accept my invitation and looking forward to seeing you soon at the
party
. Best wishes, Maxwell
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task achievement
Ensure that the purpose of the letter is immediately clear in your opening paragraph.
coherence cohesion
Make certain that each paragraph's topic is immediately clear for the smoothest logical progression.
coherence cohesion
For greater effect, consider varying your sentence structures; this can add sophistication to your writing.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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