You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the percentage of total spending on four different categories by students in a European country from 1985 to 2015. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The pie charts illustrate how students who lived in a European country
allocating
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allocated
the
total finance Change the word
their
on
four different categories including Change preposition
to
food
, rent
, entertainment
and clothes
.
In 1985, the cost of food
occupied the most budget, and its percentage
reached 30%. Meanwhile, the proportion of the money spent on clothes
was minimum reaching 25%. At the moment, the percentages of rent
and entertainment
attained 25% separately.
In 1995, the consumption of clothes
dropped a lot with its percentage
becoming 13%. The percentages of spending on entertainment
and rent
increased to 28% and 29% respectively. The percentage
of food
consumption kept the
steady without changes.
In 2005, the proportion of Correct article usage
apply
entertainment
, food
and clothes
decrease
to 20%, 25% and 12% separately with Wrong verb form
decreased
rent
's percentage
soaring to 43%
In 2015, rent
consumed half of the total budget while
the proportion of other items declined constantly. The money spent on clothes
occupied only 10% of total consumption. Meanwhile, the percentages of
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for
food
and entertainment
were 22% and 18% respectively.Submitted by iou122 on
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