You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The charts below show the percentage of total spending on four different categories by students in a European country from 1985 to 2015. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

 

The charts below show the percentage of total spending on four different categories by students in a European country from 1985 to 2015.

 

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

 

Write at least 150 words.
The pie charts illustrate how students who lived in a European country
allocating
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the
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total finance
on
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four different categories including
food
,
rent
,
entertainment
and
clothes
. In 1985, the cost of
food
occupied the most budget, and its
percentage
reached 30%. Meanwhile, the proportion of the money spent on
clothes
was minimum reaching 25%. At the moment, the percentages of
rent
and
entertainment
attained 25% separately. In 1995, the consumption of
clothes
dropped a lot with its
percentage
becoming 13%. The percentages of spending on
entertainment
and
rent
increased to 28% and 29% respectively. The
percentage
of
food
consumption kept
the
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steady without changes. In 2005, the proportion of
entertainment
,
food
and
clothes
decrease
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to 20%, 25% and 12% separately with
rent
's
percentage
soaring to 43% In 2015,
rent
consumed half of the total budget
while
the proportion of other items declined constantly. The money spent on
clothes
occupied only 10% of total consumption. Meanwhile, the percentages
of
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food
and
entertainment
were 22% and 18% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words food, rent, entertainment, clothes, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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