The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to Charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.

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bar chart illustrates the proportion of British citizens who

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donations to charity organizations between 1990 and 2010 among six different

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groups. It is clear from the graph that less than half of the population is engaged in donating

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with, the donation trend has increased significantly from the 18 to 50

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groups during a period of 20 years. The peak point was in 1990 for the

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group 35-50, accounting for 42%,

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there was a slight fall in 2010 to 35%.

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, the younger generation (18-25) is less interested in giving

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compared to 1990. Only 6% of young people give

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, which is almost three times less than in 1990.

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, the

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group of 51 to 65 and over 65 shows a negligible difference in their donation compared to other groups. Only 35% of senior citizens gave

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to charity in 2010, which was a slight decrease from the 32% responsible for the downward trend in 1990. In conclusion, we can say that the

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these two decades.