The chart below gives information on the percentage of British people giving money to Charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010.
The
given
bar chart illustrates the proportion of British citizens who Verb problem
apply
provide
donations to charity organizations between 1990 and 2010 among six different Wrong verb form
provided
age
groups. It is clear from the graph that less than half of the population is engaged in donating money
.
To begin
with, the donation trend has increased significantly from the 18 to 50 age
groups during a period of 20 years. The peak point was in 1990 for the age
group 35-50, accounting for 42%, whereas
there was a slight fall in 2010 to 35%. However
, the younger generation (18-25) is less interested in giving money
compared to 1990. Only 6% of young people give money
, which is almost three times less than in 1990.
Furthermore
, the age
group of 51 to 65 and over 65 shows a negligible difference in their donation compared to other groups. Only 35% of senior citizens gave money
to charity in 2010, which was a slight decrease from the 32% responsible for the downward trend in 1990.
In conclusion, we can say that the the
increase Remove the redundancy
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of
donation tendency Change preposition
in
is depend
on the increase Change the verb form
depends
of
their Change preposition
in
age
level durning
these two decades.Correct your spelling
during
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