The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts provide information on temperatures and daylight hours in two countries (
London
and
Sydney
) during the same weekend in
December
2018.
Overall
, the average
temperature
in
London
was relatively lower than in
Sydney
. Australia had a long daytime,
while
the UK had less daytime during the weekend.
To begin
with, the highest
temperature
in
London
was 13
°C
on Saturday (
December
29, 2018), and the lowest
temperature
recorded was 3 °C on the same day.
However
, in
Sydney
, the
temperature
reached a peak of 31 °C on Sunday,
December
30, 2018,
while
the minimum
temperature
was 17
°C
on Friday,
December
28. Turning to sunrises, the average time of sunrise was
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8.05 a.
m
. in
London
, and dawn was around 3.57 p.
m
. Compared to the UK, sunrise in Australia was earlier at around 5.45 p.
m
. and sunset at approximately 8.07 p.
m
.
Furthermore
,
London
received daylight for about 7 hours during the weekends,
while
Sydney
received it for approximately 14 hours.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • temperatures
  • hours of daylight
  • comparison
  • London
  • Sydney
  • December 2018
  • weekend
  • information
  • data
  • summarise
  • select
  • report
  • features
  • analysis
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