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The table below show th number of cars produced im three countries from 2003 to 2009. Sumarize the infomation by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make compairisons where relevant.

The table below show th number of cars produced im three countries from 2003 to 2009. Sumarize the infomation by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make compairisons where relevant.
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The table provides information about the car
production
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 numbers in
Argentina
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,
Australia
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, and
Thailand
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 between 2003 and 2009.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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Thailand
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 produced the highest
number
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 of
cars
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 compared to the three other categories,
while
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Argentina
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 and
Australia
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 shared similar quantities of
cars
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.
To begin
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 with, the automobile industry in
Thailand
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 managed to fabricate the highest
number
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 of
cars
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 throughout the years and hit a
production
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 peak in 2006, which accounted for 1,162,356
cars
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.
Conversely
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,
Argentina
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 only managed to produce 352,759
cars
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 in 2006,
whereas
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 the Australian
production
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 rate was slightly below
Argentina
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's (341,268).
Moreover
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,
Thailand
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also
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 became the forerunner in 2003 and 2009, which accounted for 735,825 and 999,963, respectively. In 2003, the second highest
number
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 of
cars
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 was produced in
Australia
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 at 452,000, marking the highest
production
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 period in
Australia
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.
However
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,
Argentina
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 only fabricated below 250,000.
On the other hand
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,
Argentina
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 boosted their
production
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number
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 to 466,089 in 2009, becoming the most productive year in
Argentina
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.
However
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,
Australia
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 dropped its
production
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 to only 245,264 in the same year.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words production, argentina, australia, thailand, number, cars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • car production
  • trends
  • growth
  • decline
  • peak production
  • increase
  • decrease
  • fluctuation
  • volume
  • relative position
  • trend analysis
  • manufacturing output
  • industrial performance
  • year-over-year change
  • comparison
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