Write a letter to a sports club. Tell them you are not satisfied with the service and have already let them know about this. Write ▪What exactly wrong with their service ▪What happened after you complained the first time ▪What you want the club to do after your letter

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

this

to express my disappointment regarding the bad service that we members of the club are receiving despite paying a hefty amount of fees. I am a gold member of

this

club ,and I took the initiative of writing about

this

to management before as well but unfortunately

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appropriate action has not

taken

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by any manager yet. The issue is with changing room door locks and sanitization of restrooms. The lock of the changing room has been broken for the

last

few months and members do not feel safe

while

using these rooms as anyone can enter inside as rooms are unlocked.

Moreover

, the smell from restrooms is unbearable seems like proper sanitization and cleaning are not done. I wrote my concern to management earlier as well but seems like no one paid attention to

this

issue

this

is very inappropriate and unsafe because of health-related and personal reasons. I request authorities pay attention to

this

issue and get the door fixed

as well as

to keep an eye on the sanitization of restrooms.

Otherwise

, disappointed members may leave the club

due to

the unavailability of good services. I look forward to hearing a positive response. Yours sincerely, Gill