The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in France in 1950 and 2010

The pie charts below show the average household expenditures in France in 1950 and 2010
The pie charts compare the average spending for various 6 types of household
activities
in France in 1950 and 2010.
Overall
, the expenditure for housing is the dominant part of total expenses in 1950
while
it accounts
only
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a quarter of the chart in 2010. On the one hand, France's population spent the main part of their income on housing
activities
which was 3 times more than another 5 expenses
such
as food, health care, education, transportation and other household
activities
in 1950.
In addition
to
this
, food spending was the second highest amount in 1950 spending.
On the other hand
, food expenditure increased dramatically by 23 % ,approximately, in 2010 rather than 60 years before the data.
Moreover
, it is clearly seen that the expenditure for households in France went up a remarkable amount in 2010 compared with 1950 figures except for only education and housing
activities
for households.
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