The following diagrams
illustrates
the basic amount of funds invested in households in two different countries during the period of 2010.
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illustrate
Firstly
, the transportation costs in Japan were more than in Malaysia two times(10 per Linking Words
cent
). The average costs for food in Japan and Malaysia were approximately Use synonyms
same
and accounted for almost a quarter and 27 per Correct article usage
the same
cent
respectively. Use synonyms
In addition
, the proportion of money spent on medical purposes was Linking Words
noticebly
less than for other purposes and made up only 6 per Correct your spelling
noticeably
cent
for Use synonyms
Japaniese
and 3 per Correct your spelling
Japanese
cent
for Malaysians.
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Secondly
, the population of Malaysia spent over a third of household Linking Words
spendings
on housing Fix the agreement mistake
spending
while
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Japaniese
invested in houses 21 per Correct your spelling
Japanese
cent
. Use synonyms
Other average percentage
of Change the wording
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Other average percentages
remaining
money from all expenses in both countries Correct article usage
the remaining
spent
on different services and goods.
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was spent
overall
perspective, the main source of expense in Japan was transportation Linking Words
while
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malaysians
spent the basic amount of money on housing on Change the capitalization
Malaysians
the
average.Correct article usage
apply