the diagram show the cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon
The diagrams provide information about the cyclical life process of
salmon
as a species of large fish
.
Overall
, it reveals that there are four distinct stages in the process, and it shows they occur in freshwater and saline water with different lifespan
.
In the initial stage, Fix the agreement mistake
lifespans
salmon
eggs are situated in the upper river underneath small stones and reeds where the water flow is slow. It took around 5-6 months to wait until the eggs are
hatched to become small Wrong verb form
were
fish
. After that, those small fish
which
called fry that length Correct pronoun usage
apply
at
3-8 cm travelled to the fast Change preposition
of
lowing
river and spent approximately 4 years before ready to move to the open sea.
In the subsequent stage, the growing Correct your spelling
flowing
fish
that is
smolt with
12-15cm long entered the ocean and used about five years Correct word choice
apply
long
to stay before becoming the adult Correct word choice
apply
salmon
of
70-76 cm long. By reaching Change preposition
apply
this
stage, the salmon
turned back to the upper river to transfer their eggs.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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