Many think religion should be taught in schools while others think it should be avoided. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Significant

Change the article

A significant

The significant

show examples

number of people out there

holds

Correct subject-verb agreement

hold

show examples

the perception that doctrine should be educated in schools,

by contrast

, other individuals

also

share the sentiment that it should not be part

in

Change preposition

of

show examples

educational

Correct article usage

the educational

show examples

curriculum

hence

it should be halted.

This

essay shall completely endorse the former assertion.

However

, the two opposing views will be brought to bear in the following paragraphs after which a logical conclusion will be drawn. On one hand, it is blatant that religion fosters spiritual development. Because it entails

of

Change preposition

apply

show examples

morals

as well as

ethics, if trainees are being taught of it, they would develop the habit of being

curteous

Correct your spelling

courteous

as a result

making them

to

Change the verb form

apply

show examples

become

a responsible citizens

Correct the article-noun agreement

responsible citizens

a responsible citizen

show examples

and

also

preventing them from unscrupulous activities

such

as armed robbery, gambling and prostitution.

For instance

, a survey was conducted by

religious

Add an article

a religious

show examples

group in Africa two years ago and revealed that countries

who

Correct pronoun usage

that

show examples

involve morality in various schools do not encounter more

crime

Replace the word

criminal

show examples

activities,

hence

it is not in doubt that the argument against doctrines in schools has a myriad of supporters because it is a plethora of advantages not only to the general public but

also

in

an individuals

Correct the article-noun agreement

individuals

an individual

show examples

.

On the other hand

, it is apparent that sometimes adding a myth in a curriculum can lead to misunderstanding between pupils. To explicate

this

scenario, since individuals

has

Change the verb form

have

show examples

his or her own beliefs, one might not accept a different myth in view of

this

, conflict can arise.

For example

, people who are being

natured

Replace the word

natural

show examples

in Muslim will find it difficult to accept Christianity and

is

Correct pronoun usage

this is

show examples

the reason why conflicts

has

Change the verb form

have

show examples

been

arising

Correct your spelling

rising

show examples

in some part of Arabic nations. It is in light of

this

that avoiding

myth

Fix the agreement mistake

myths

show examples

in education is a justifiable course of

actions

Fix the agreement mistake

action

show examples

. In conclusion, after analyzing the two contradictory ideas. I strongly believe that doctrine should be part

in

Change preposition

of

show examples

education,

nonetheless

, I recommend that the Ministry of

Educaion

Correct your spelling

Education

in various nations should educate

it

Correct pronoun usage

its

show examples

citizens about the subject and make it more interesting.