The chart shows the average number of hours each day that Chinese, American, Turkish and Brazilian tourists spent doing leisure activities while on holiday in Greece in August 2019.
The bar graph illustrates how tourists that
Chinese
, American, Turkish and Brazilian
Replace the word
Brazilians
enjoy
their holidays Wrong verb form
enjoyed
especially
in Greece, Add the comma(s)
, especially
on
August 2019.
The kind of categories are going to the beach, reading books, and visiting other places. Change preposition
in
Overall
, tourists did
not want to look Wrong verb form
do
on
Change preposition
at
another landscapes
so the extent of visiting places is the smallest.
At Replace the adjective
another landscape
other landscapes
first,
the most striking point is the orange one. Chinese
tourists’ hour with books was overwhelming. It seems that about double compared with the lowest people, Turkey and Brazil. There were huge differences among reading, while
going out reach
a lowest of just 1 hour.
Brazilians were at the beach the longest, they were Wrong verb form
reached
also
3 hours more than Chinese
, the shortest one. Turkish and American passed at diverse spots over against Chinese
and Brazilian, nevertheless
it had not so big gaps. The average of activities Add a comma
nevertheless,
is
showed Unnecessary verb
apply
best
balance with Turkish. Change the article
the best
In contrast
, we can find the bias of tendency with Chinese
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Vocabulary: Replace the words chinese with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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