Some people believe that eventually all the jobs will be done by artificial intelligence. What is your opinion?
According to
some, in the future almost all the works
can be done by artificial Fix the agreement mistake
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intelligence
however
, I strongly disagree with this
statement because AI cannot replicate human nature and it is only a tool that makes human work
more efficient.
AI cannot be act
like humans in a Change the verb form
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work
with creativity, emotions and making decisions. Even AI
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though AI
work
life easier people cannot depend on that all the time because still
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unable
to understand the emotions of Add a missing verb
is unable
the
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humans
For instance
, if a robot handling an emergency call it can only assist the person as instructed but cannot understand how that person feels or need any emotional guidelines. Moreover
, human nature is always changing according to
the situation and time whereas
, still experts struggling to replicate the AI with Correct word choice
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such
intentions. Therefore
, bots
are
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be replace
all the Change the verb form
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work
because there is always a need for real people's help to do the work
.
On the other hand
, artificial intelligence
is a tool which is designed to make day-to-day jobs easier. Most of
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the
companies use AI tools to enhance the performance of Correct article usage
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the
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their
work
and services. For example
, Google uses AI bots
to monitor,process and secure customer data because trillions of data cannot be handled by employers therefore
, well-instructed bots
are managing these tasks. However
, these bots
can do only trained tasks and cannot do more than that therefore
, whenever any issue occure
employers need to handle those issues since they cannot be handled by the AI.
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occur
To conclude
, artificial intelligence
taking over people is entirely not possible because it can only be used as a supporting tool and these robots cannot replace human nature even in the future. Therefore
, in any kind of work
manpower always
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