Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

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Different people have different choices regarding the
preferance
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preference
to
work
for a large
company
or a small
company
. I always choose to
work
for a large
company
because of
higher
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the higher
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possibility to learn from different efficient and
talend
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talented
people and
also
chance
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a chance
the chance
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to express myself in bigger stages.
Firstly
,
knowledgable
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knowledgeable
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and efficient people are recruited in
the
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apply
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most large
companies
.
As a result
,
i
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can learn more and faster if
i
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can have
chance
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a chance
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to
work
with them in a close vicinity. Namely,
i
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am a automobile engineer and if
i
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I
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could get a chance to
work
for Toyota
then
it would
by
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be
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huge
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the huge
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opportunity to learn from
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the worlds
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worlds
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best car manufacturers.
Furthermore
, most large
companies
are running
through
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in
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a very planned and structured way, namely defined job
responisibilities
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responsibilities
,
proper
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and proper
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perfromance
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performance
indicators.
Additionally
, large
companies
offer good and healthy
salary
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salaries
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with medical facilities
as well as
insaurances
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insurances
insurance
.
Furthermore
, there are always higher chances to express myself in bigger stages. Specifically, large
companies
do different ventures or partnerships with other large
companies
, so that there are always
opportunites
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opportunities
to express or deliver myself in bigger projects. In conclusion, it is always a great opportunity to
work
for a large
company
which will give an employee a good social value.
Similarly
, for a better
certainity
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certainty
in my career, large
companies
are
better
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a better
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option.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph logically flows from one to another, and use a diverse range of cohesive devices effectively to enhance the logical structure.
coherence cohesion
Introduce the topic effectively and present a clear conclusion that summarizes your main points, reinforcing your argument.
coherence cohesion
Develop main points with specific details and examples to support your arguments, rather than making general statements.
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Present clear and comprehensive ideas that directly relate to the question, using appropriate and accurate language.
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Include relevant, specific examples that support your position. These examples should be detailed and demonstrate a clear link to your main points.

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