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The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities.

The graph shows the annual income of languages-related jobs in US dollars in five cities.
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The bar chart shows information about the annual
income
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 of languages-related jobs
such
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 as interpreter, translator, and language teacher in US
dollars
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 in five cities
such
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 as
Mexico
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, Dubai, Paris, Munich, and
Toronto
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. As can be seen from the graph, it is obvious that there is the least
income
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 of three jobs in
Mexico
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. In detail, workers who were interpreters in
Toronto
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 were four times as high-
income
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 as in
Mexico
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, with 80000
dollars
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 compared to 20000
dollars
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, meanwhile, translators and language teachers in
Mexico
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 were three times as low-
income
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 as in
Toronto
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. Looking at the details, translators had the same levels of
income
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 in Paris, Munich, and
Toronto
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, with approximately 65000. Likely, language teachers earn an
income
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 in Dubai equal to Munich, with 6000.
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, individuals who work in
Toronto
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 have a bit higher
income
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, with 65000
while
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 teachers in Paris just obtained, with 45000. In conclusion,
Mexico
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 is the city which has the lowest
income
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 with less than 20000
dollars
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 in the three groups of jobs.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words income, dollars, mexico, toronto with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • annual income
  • language-related professions
  • urban areas
  • disparity
  • income levels
  • compensation
  • financial incentives
  • demand
  • cost of living
  • industry presence
  • career prospects
  • job markets
  • economic incentives
  • language education
  • tourism industry
  • education sector
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