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The graph shows the number of people taking parts in 4 kinds of sports in a particular region between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph displays the proportion of four types of sports
taken
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 by individuals between 1985 and 2005.
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, rugby witnessed the wildest decrease from the highest to the lowest position, whilst the remaining kinds of sports were relatively stable. Two activities, which are basketball and badminton, were static through all given years. For basketball, the
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 of people, who were attending it, was approximately 75. Despite
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, the badminton
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 was slightly less and differed only by 25 with basketball, which was around 50 all the time.
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, the other two left activities were more unstable, than the previous ones. They crossed in 1995 and had the same
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 of people, which was 200. The rugby dropped from merely under 250 in 1985 to the lowest
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 in 2005, which was 50.
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, tennis steadily increased from 150 in 1985 to just over 200 in 2005, which led to the biggest
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 among other given sports.

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