The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. ( task 1, cam 13 test 1)
The given maps provide information about how a hospital in an urban was accessed by road between 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that access to the clinic has been well developed with a car park not only for the public but Linking Words
also
for the personnel. Linking Words
Moreover
, a roundabout has been well constructed.
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To begin
with, in 2007, a ring lane was located in the north of the picture, Linking Words
in addition
, the Linking Words
city
clinic was situated just below the north. Use synonyms
Moreover
, both the general public Linking Words
as well as
the staff shared the same car parking space. Linking Words
Furthermore
, there were six bus stops with a hospital route situated in the middle of the bus stop. Linking Words
Also
, Linking Words
city
roads were available which branched not only in the west but Use synonyms
also
in the east Linking Words
as well as
in the south.
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By contrast
, in 2010, access to the hospital has completely changed. Linking Words
Firstly
, the public Linking Words
as well as
the workforce have their own parking space. Linking Words
While
the public has their parking space located in the east of the design, the staff has their own in the east near the Linking Words
city
road. Use synonyms
Secondly
, a bus station has been constructed which can be found in the west section of the plan. Linking Words
This
station branched to the north and the south roundabout of the map, Linking Words
however
, both the ring avenue and the Linking Words
city
pavement remained unchanged.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words city with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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