The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. ( task 1, cam 13 test 1)

The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010. ( task 1, cam 13 test 1)
The given maps provide information about how a hospital in an urban was accessed by road between 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that access to the clinic has been well developed with a car park not only for the public but
also
for the personnel.
Moreover
, a roundabout has been well constructed.
To begin
with, in 2007, a ring lane was located in the north of the picture,
in addition
, the
city
clinic was situated just below the north.
Moreover
, both the general public
as well as
the staff shared the same car parking space.
Furthermore
, there were six bus stops with a hospital route situated in the middle of the bus stop.
Also
,
city
roads were available which branched not only in the west but
also
in the east
as well as
in the south.
By contrast
, in 2010, access to the hospital has completely changed.
Firstly
, the public
as well as
the workforce have their own parking space.
While
the public has their parking space located in the east of the design, the staff has their own in the east near the
city
road.
Secondly
, a bus station has been constructed which can be found in the west section of the plan.
This
station branched to the north and the south roundabout of the map,
however
, both the ring avenue and the
city
pavement remained unchanged.
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