Write a letter to your friend who wants to visit your hometown. In your letter say • When is the best time to visit • Recommend someplace to stay • Invite her/him to your house
Dear Janet,
I got your message
this
morning about your intention to visit my hometown by month's end. well, I think that is
a great idea and you will definitely enjoy your trip.
As a matter of fact, I would advise that the best time to travel down is during summer so as to avoid damp and slippery roads. Also
, it will be sunny, therefore
, good weather for you and your family to go hiking up the mountains. Additionally
, your children will be able to visit the beaches and many other fun places.
Although
, I have an apartment within the town, however
, I would advise you to lodge in the resorts since they are closer to the beaches. From my experience, they are safe enough for children and they organize events for young kids in order to get them engaged with fun activities.
Moreover
, after completing your trip, I would appreciate it if you could pay me a visit before leaving the town. I promise to house you to a lovely dinner and you will love it.
I can't wait to see you again.
Warm regards,
Moses.Submitted by peteromisakin on
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complete response
You have effectively addressed all parts of the prompt, giving detailed recommendations and a warm invitation.
suitable writing tone
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greeting and closing
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